Craft Talk
Once, someone began a poem not long after the loss
of someone she loved, and which she never managed
to make work. Or at least this is the story I was told.
That although there was a moment in her drafts—
a cottonwood sun-drenched in a field—that seemed
more or less fine, she understood, after a few years,
the poem would only fail and so she began on a whim
moving her pen in loops across every line, taking
her time, taking care to darken the places where
her letters showed through, enjoying the act of making
her words disappear, letting the poem find a new shape
as what she drew extended into the white space, past
where her words stopped. When she stopped, she noticed
what she’d drawn resembled blades of grass or maybe
branches bent in a gust of wind. It’s hard to know—
isn’t it?—what we mean when we say a poem works.
She found a place to thumbtack the page above her desk
and although most of the time, when she remembers
to look at it, she sees scribbles of ink burying words,
there are days—hard earned—when she sees once again
the wind doing what it does or branches or grass,
the kind of thing she’d been trying to write all along.